Michael asks…Is this story any good (tell me what you think and how i can aprove it)?The gleaming sun shined warmth on my face. This is a small luxury for me, a street rat. But I can’t enjoy this day now because I am running. Chased, is more like it, by the guards and their screeching hounds.
“Stop,” yelled the captain, “In the name of the king STOP”
Now why on earth would I stop? I just ‘borrowed’ an apple and when it might have been for the king’s dinner I think he will eat
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